It's All About What's Written
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Jefffff
8:37 PM on January 6, 2010
PATRICIA!!! just thought id drop a comment! really awesome work pish...ur just awesome!
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10:38 PM on December 30, 2009
Your story is actually really good. I like it a lot. Just a few critiques.
"For me, applying was a downfall because I was automatically going to get in."
Are you sure you want to use 'downfall?'
Try to vary your sentence structure, and only use adverbs to describe speech sparingly. Like, "blah," she said, adverbly. "...." Juliet said, interestedly only takes away from the story.
Finally.
Twilight? Seriously? You couldn't come up with a better book? EVERYONE likes Twilight. It's not much of a bonding point. Use something more obscure, or something classic. Shakespeare, Dickens, or even a book of poetry. Just don't. Use. Twilight. Cause it's only gonna turn off people who don't like Twilight.
It's very good.
"For me, applying was a downfall because I was automatically going to get in."
Are you sure you want to use 'downfall?'
Try to vary your sentence structure, and only use adverbs to describe speech sparingly. Like, "blah," she said, adverbly. "...." Juliet said, interestedly only takes away from the story.
Finally.
Twilight? Seriously? You couldn't come up with a better book? EVERYONE likes Twilight. It's not much of a bonding point. Use something more obscure, or something classic. Shakespeare, Dickens, or even a book of poetry. Just don't. Use. Twilight. Cause it's only gonna turn off people who don't like Twilight.
It's very good.
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12:09 AM on December 28, 2009
She seemed nice and very well spoken, despite everything that people are saying about her. As for moving in next door to me? this would happen to me; just what I need, a diva living next door.
that makes no sense. you said she was nice then called her a diva..
that makes no sense. you said she was nice then called her a diva..
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Julie Rohnstock
1:22 PM on December 24, 2009
well i must sayy sisterr this is quitee lovelyyy!
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rere/ rusia/ Lena
12:38 PM on December 24, 2009
i love this rere! i miss u as well, and i hope u like my "nameS" that identify me on this website thingy......... listen i just woke up i have no clue what i am saying, BUT I LOVE THIS! and love u
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Rachelle
11:20 AM on December 24, 2009
This is so cute! I love your pictures (: I'm going to constatnly creep now
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